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Post by Cy Skywalker on Feb 25, 2005 20:48:00 GMT -5
thanks. And nice poem, JA.
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Post by Jedi Arwen ~ Protector of Life on Feb 26, 2005 1:45:36 GMT -5
thanks*bows*
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Post by MFB on Mar 4, 2005 0:37:00 GMT -5
Awesome poem, JA. You certainly best me in poetry. And the fic was totally awesome.
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Post by Cy Skywalker on Mar 4, 2005 17:43:15 GMT -5
...deja vu
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Post by Jedi Arwen ~ Protector of Life on Mar 21, 2005 2:32:10 GMT -5
thank you MFB! I have yet to read your story...you told me not too...YET!! I await patently..................
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Post by Cy Skywalker on Jun 7, 2005 18:45:56 GMT -5
!!! It said 'the thread you have accessed does not exist"...but I don't exist..."this is not the thread you're looking for." *shiver*
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Post by Jaina~ timesplitter on Jun 14, 2005 18:47:54 GMT -5
lol
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Post by Cy Skywalker on Oct 4, 2005 14:10:55 GMT -5
So Master Eisley, you venture into the dangerous realm we call ObiDala! That is what "Solitude" is about, is it not? Of course. Your wording has improved from last, "self-vaped", great term, and your emotion-recall is still there, still feeling the same. As for POV...well obviously Obi-wan is out of character because of the romance. I begin wonder if you have to do that...but otherwise it makes sense. Continue!
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Post by Jedi Master Eisley Oricla on Oct 4, 2005 20:28:24 GMT -5
One is not a real fan-fiction author unless one wanders into that world!! lol I had to try. Yes wording has improved muchliest. . . . . I like to have the Prolouge be from the main characters pov just to give the rest of it a sense of reality. Following chapters will be in 3rd person. Thank you for the kind review
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Post by Cy Skywalker on Oct 5, 2005 7:12:41 GMT -5
One is not a real fan-fiction author unless one wanders into that world!! Force forbid! Gack...you're welcome. I guess the switching to third person will work if you pull it off with a rather omniscient voice.
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Post by Jedi Master Eisley Oricla on Oct 5, 2005 18:40:41 GMT -5
*laughs Evilly* We shall see won't we??
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