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Post by K*doom*ELF on Nov 10, 2004 14:39:47 GMT -5
YAYAY! this is where we can reveiw ANYTHING! (appropriate) about the wonder fics found here....
COOL little picture thingie MFB!!! you photoedit!? or did you get the pic elsewhere?... ... ... I cant WAIT to read...
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Post by Cy Skywalker on Nov 10, 2004 15:35:54 GMT -5
love your pic, MFB. obviously from the sles of reviews at FF.net i read your fic before. i should have hordeloads of them up here sometime, b/c i'll even put the in-progress ones i only want a select few to read so they can tell me how whacky they are. but i gotta go to my dads to do that. and have a lot of time.
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Post by Tiana Calthye on Nov 10, 2004 18:54:45 GMT -5
Bah. I can make posters too. Intersting, though... *evil laughter* Must post Paint Wars, even if it'll make little sense...
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Post by MFB on Nov 11, 2004 0:06:50 GMT -5
"COOL little picture thingie MFB!!! you photoedit!? or did you get the pic elsewhere?... ... ... I cant WAIT to read... " Glad you are excited! ;D Makes it all worthwhile. Actually, I don't have photoshop or anything fancy. Just Microsoft Paint. lol  But I replaced that picture with a better quality one, etited with a trial copy of Paint Shop Pro. ;D |
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Post by Tiana Calthye on Nov 11, 2004 14:56:32 GMT -5
And yup, it looks a lot better now. Heehee. I don't have a very fancy program either-- I use AcrSoft-- but 'tis better than Paint by far.
Paint= pathetic.
Good story. It has one heck of a plot mixed in with extencive humor. My only drawback to it was that you wrote the first stuff very, very well, then switched over to script, though keeping the discriptions in tact. Scripts are easier to write, true, and easy to read, but they are almost... lazy. If you know what I'm saying.
Which is why I probably used to write them all the time.
Don't mind me, I'm a critical reviewer. Just... I would've rathered seeing it wrote in quote dialogue. But that was your choice.
I really liked the plot, it was very in depth, and looks to be an intersting story, even if I know almost nothing about the fandom it's taken from.
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Post by MFB on Nov 11, 2004 15:24:56 GMT -5
Yeah, paint is very pathetic. It can't even re-size properly.  Glad you liked the opening. I have a lot of issues with it. To me it goes back and forth between awesome and boring, epic to tedious, etc. Yeah, the script style could be called the "lazy" way. If I had quotations instead of scripts my fanfic would be more like 300 pages to the 240 I currently have. But it is far to late to change that as I have gotten used to it and find that it suits my tastes. It's especially usefull when trying to find a particular quote or when finding where you left off. I've never really found an instance where it hindered me from getting the right explaination, in fact it might even be more efficent for me. I guess some like it and some don't. The re-edited version I'm working on (even though the whole isn't complete) is mainly for added descriptions of places/characters and adding some background history and extra dialouge. I found after a year of writing it, my discriptions were becomeing more defined and precise so I really wanted to go back and do the same for my first chapters. Another reason is because a lot of my relatives who know NOTHING about Zelda were going and reading it. So I wanted a version that could be read without any knowledge of Zelda at all. I also want to mention that the first version of Chapter I was a mere five pages long with minimal descriptions and a measly plot. The second one it ten pages with over three times the amount of words, just to give an idea of how pathetic the first version was. Anyway, Hopefully the thing made enough sense to you. ;D Thanks for reading! ;D |
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Post by K*doom*ELF on Nov 12, 2004 15:14:13 GMT -5
YAYYFULL! even if you didnt re edit it id read it over...i havent read it since i finished chap 18/19 whichever now i need to refresh my memory...
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Post by K*doom*ELF on Nov 12, 2004 15:28:51 GMT -5
*sniff* he depressing once poem was depresing but good... i already read it and already told you it was good...but now im sayin it again 8) <----> 8(
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Post by Cy Skywalker on Nov 14, 2004 9:49:05 GMT -5
Uhm!
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Post by Spazzy on Nov 24, 2004 12:41:55 GMT -5
i have no idea what book u r talking about.. i think i don't read the same books as u uys but, that is alrite.. I am cool with that. I will have to read the book sometime.. i guess depending on how ya'll liked it ;D
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Post by Cy Skywalker on Nov 24, 2004 16:14:05 GMT -5
I think they mean MFB's fic.
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Post by MFB on Nov 28, 2004 20:24:40 GMT -5
Hey Meg, reviewin' your Yingyn Riders fic. I read it like...3 weeks ago, but I didn't review it cause I'm, you know, lazy and a bum. ;D  Anyways, to keep it short and sweet...er, simple...or...boring, it was excellent! Did you reaqlly create that on your own? Very cool. it was very deep and imersing. It seems like you have a lot going for it, so you'd best continue. I can understand this one better than the Star Wars ones (too many races...*dies*). ;D |
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Post by Cy Skywalker on Nov 30, 2004 18:23:31 GMT -5
really?! thou likest it!?! ah the powers of a review to make an author feel warm and fuzzy. i'll put more up once it...figure it out. Next on Yingyn Riders, complicated explanations of magic and a Qui-gon lookalike! Don't touch that dial...mouse...whatever.
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Post by MFB on Dec 2, 2004 16:46:39 GMT -5
Yes, very fuzzily warmish. Unless you get flames.  |
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Post by K*doom*ELF on Dec 2, 2004 17:19:03 GMT -5
FLAMING AND TRASHING = BADBADBADBAD!!!
right now i am making the rule: THERE IS TO BE NO FLAMING OF THESE AWESOME WORKS!!! EVER!!! even if the story really IS trashy, though there are NONE here at the moment!!!
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Post by MFB on Dec 2, 2004 17:22:40 GMT -5
Agreed. I hate flames. Although I've really only gotten two ever out of some 250 reviews. ;D
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Post by K*doom*ELF on Dec 2, 2004 17:51:31 GMT -5
YOU ACTUALLY GOT FLAMES!!!??? for links story? that is the best who could ever flame it and WHY!!!???
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Post by MFB on Dec 2, 2004 17:58:28 GMT -5
Let me see if I can dig up the review... ;D |
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Post by MFB on Dec 2, 2004 18:03:54 GMT -5
Ack, never mind, it's gone. But I can dig up my reply! ;D
"crap...****... my 1st story is better!!"
I am rubber and you are glue. Whatever you say bounces off me and sticks to you! NEVER FLAME MY FIC AGAIN!
Love, MFB =) Have a nice day!
The quote is his post. He sent another one, but I deleted that as well. He must've been in a BAAAAAAD mood. ;D
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Post by K*doom*ELF on Dec 2, 2004 18:05:19 GMT -5
WAS HE FLAMING LINKS STORY!? i would have killed him!
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But I replaced that picture with a better quality one, etited with a trial copy of Paint Shop Pro. ;D
Anyways, to keep it short and sweet...er, simple...or...boring, it was excellent! Did you reaqlly create that on your own? Very cool. it was very deep and imersing. It seems like you have a lot going for it, so you'd best continue. I can understand this one better than the Star Wars ones (too many races...*dies*). ;D