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Post by Spazzy on Dec 5, 2004 11:18:59 GMT -5
TEXT Well, Skywalker told me that I should post my poem and see what people think... or this could be a thread of poems... Either way works with me.. ;D Sonny--Me too!!! Cher--You don't even know what a poem is you ding bat Sonny-I know your a dig bat but, what am I?? Cher---RRRRRRRRRRRRR!!! Sonny---AHHHHHHH!!!! Here is my poem.. Not Different We're not different no, we're not If you look on the inside, look through our skin You will see a human body A heart, that beats, eyes that see We're all the same on the inside So, next time look beyond my color And See Me.....
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Post by MFB on Dec 5, 2004 21:02:42 GMT -5
it's a great poem, but this page is primarily for fanfiction--what you have here is more like origional fiction. Maybe you should ask THE for an origional fiction page? It's fine here, of course, but I'm just making a comment. ;D
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Post by Cy Skywalker on Dec 6, 2004 19:56:50 GMT -5
o you know that's a good point, but Yingyn Riders is OF to and so maybe this should be a fiction-of-all-and-sundry-types board.
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Post by Spazzy on Dec 6, 2004 20:04:27 GMT -5
I didn't know... See no one tells me these things ;D
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Post by K*doom*ELF on Dec 6, 2004 20:12:41 GMT -5
Its all right! now it has been moved to its proper place!!! ;D
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