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Post by Spazzy on Dec 17, 2004 15:28:28 GMT -5
well, THE, i have to learn it someway and since i am always posting, i figure, i can add it... I just need to switch it to the second part i need to remember but, of course, i forgot it... typical.... Yes.. silver a very intriguing story... I like your story and poem.. I can't wait for you to post more! ;D
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Post by MFB on Dec 18, 2004 0:47:24 GMT -5
You poem was surpizingly well-written for a fifth grader, Silver. When i was that age, you were lucky enough to get five words outta me into any printed form. It was also intriguing and deep, anothing thing that seems rare in 5th graders. I sudder to imagine what difficulty concieved ideas you could create as of now...very well done.
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Post by Cy Skywalker on Dec 18, 2004 11:36:55 GMT -5
the poem was very cool and thought-provoking. Mostly nice description in the little fic, and I want to know more about it! But you don't...it's so WEIRD to find stuff you don't remember when you wrote it, because usually there's so much connected behind a story and when you can't remember it it's like...weird.
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Post by Spazzy on Dec 18, 2004 21:18:54 GMT -5
I like the beginning of the story... I can't wait for the rest of it... ;D
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Post by SilverSergyon13 on Dec 18, 2004 21:25:03 GMT -5
Dude, I just realized this is where ppl tell u about how they liked there story. For the whole time before, I was like, What doesn't anyone say anything about my stories? Do they hate them? lol.
Well thanks guys. I like writing, but I haven't written in a while. I have a bunch of poems and stuff at school on the comp, so I can put those in if I get time at school to do that. I also have a ton somewhere in a box, but my mom has to find them. I will post more soon though!
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Post by Cy Skywalker on Dec 19, 2004 8:07:23 GMT -5
no feeling as if you were hated. I gotta go read the long-awaited Sergyon fic now...
interesting! nice style. I thought Sergyons were aliens though...*is confused* I guess i'll find out. Thank ye so much for finally posting it.
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Post by SilverSergyon13 on Dec 19, 2004 11:16:00 GMT -5
Don't worry, u'll find out. By the way, their only aliens if they're foreign....lol. Wow that just totally boggled my mind.
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Post by Cy Skywalker on Dec 20, 2004 20:48:03 GMT -5
*is still confused* ok got it! Yingyns part II'll be up soon.
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Post by Spazzy on Dec 20, 2004 21:41:49 GMT -5
Hey, Silver how are you coming with the story?? I am anxious to read all of it together....
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Post by SilverSergyon13 on Dec 20, 2004 22:03:43 GMT -5
been pretty busy, so I haven't written much as of yet. I'm working on some really cool emotional pictures though, depicting Shataarah. Will post those up soon.
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Post by MFB on Dec 21, 2004 1:20:43 GMT -5
Your OF is looking promising, Silver. A little small as of now, but I know that you are working on it. I say add on what you wrote in the "What are u?" thread, and you'd have an epic prolouge. It may not be what you want, though, so I won't try to interfere. I just admire epic prolouges. ;D
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Post by Spazzy on Dec 22, 2004 22:09:36 GMT -5
well, Silver yet again another wonderful poem.... I think that you should make a book of all your poems and put them into categories.... That would be really neat!!
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Post by Spazzy on Jan 2, 2005 15:13:34 GMT -5
CY, I like the ESPS DijQuest.... All I can say is WOW.... I am like speechless with that... Is there more to come??
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Post by Cy Skywalker on Jan 2, 2005 15:27:02 GMT -5
oh, there's much more. you're in it later, too. You get a good entrance.
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Post by Spazzy on Jan 2, 2005 16:42:55 GMT -5
I can't wait.... Thsi should be a very interesting story.... ;D
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Post by SilverSergyon13 on Jan 2, 2005 18:29:50 GMT -5
Ah yes, very interesting. Haven't read all of the stuff yet Cy, but my question is....Am I in it? lol I just have to know...
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Post by Kora on Jan 2, 2005 22:08:07 GMT -5
Wow! I love the ESPS fic, Cy! Awesomeness!
MFB, I think I told you already but I'll just say it again. I love the Keyboard curse poem! Awesomeness!
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Post by K*doom*ELF on Jan 3, 2005 16:12:11 GMT -5
yes the keyboard curse is much good, as are all your peoms silver! the ESPS is good, (i already read it) and... yeah, EVERYTHING in here is really GOOD! i may post Yaz's story here if i revise it and think its good enogh to be amoung these ggreat works!!!
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Post by Cy Skywalker on Jan 3, 2005 18:20:32 GMT -5
ss13, you're not in it YET because you weren't an ESP back then, but as we speak i am thinking of a way to put you in. So yes, eventually!
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Post by Spazzy on Jan 3, 2005 19:48:21 GMT -5
I will have to look is there more... that you added??
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