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Post by K*doom*ELF on Dec 6, 2004 20:17:13 GMT -5
Yeah, this is the place to reveiw all the works here. pretty much the same as the fanfiction board. REMEMBER!!! NO FLAMING!!! other then that, you should be smart enough to understand how this works...if not then you can ask... NOW GO READ!!!  |
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Post by Spazzy on Dec 9, 2004 19:09:02 GMT -5
I love that sort of poem MFB... I think it is cool... I especially like the ending.... It is very interesting.... Hey, did you make that up today when you were sick?
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Post by MFB on Dec 9, 2004 19:13:48 GMT -5
Yes, today, while I am sick. I don't feel so bad actually. But you never know when these things'll run outta hand. Thanks for the review. ;D
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Post by Spazzy on Dec 9, 2004 19:21:09 GMT -5
Hye, you know what, you might actually make up more poems while, you have so much time on your hands... Yea, make one of Navi or Link perhaps...
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Post by MFB on Dec 9, 2004 19:27:01 GMT -5
Nah, I'd need more inspiration than just Navi or Link. Besides, I'm working on The Boy Who Cried Chicken right now. ;D
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Post by Spazzy on Dec 10, 2004 16:44:22 GMT -5
Well, i son't know what to say.....
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Post by MFB on Dec 10, 2004 20:00:25 GMT -5
Hai Spaz! Reviewin' your Change the World poem. ;D
Overall, the point is well put. The only thing (I hope you won't mind my constructive criticism) is that the words don't rhyme. If that is your intention, then I have no beef. But it's a nice feeling when you can create a good, flowing poem that rhymes. ;D Keep it up. ;D
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Post by Spazzy on Dec 10, 2004 20:09:32 GMT -5
It wasn't initially supposed to rhym... it was a free verse, i think they call it.. I am not sure the correct temonallogy.. i will look it up
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Post by Cy Skywalker on Dec 11, 2004 10:50:22 GMT -5
MFB, your poem is hilarious. I SO know how it feels to be conspired against...though teh rhymes need some work.
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Post by Spazzy on Dec 11, 2004 11:36:08 GMT -5
yea, i like yours too... I really think that i doesn't need anything... AWESOMENESS!!
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Post by MFB on Dec 11, 2004 19:09:15 GMT -5
MFB, your poem is hilarious. I SO know how it feels to be conspired against...though teh rhymes need some work. Heck yeah: if it were ment to rhyme then I'd be a horrible author uber much. ;D It's not ment to rhyme. Somewho, I thought it made it darker. Who knows, I might go back and make it more epic someday. As of now, I'll try to concentrate on our uber epic mix of stuff fiction. ;D |
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Post by Spazzy on Dec 12, 2004 10:05:16 GMT -5
I think, that if it were to rhym it wouldn't be as awesome as it is now... I also think that, some poems don't need to have rhyms... for example mine..... ;D
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Post by Cy Skywalker on Dec 12, 2004 18:23:46 GMT -5
to make it "darker"? lol. and yeah, let's work on our fic...i'm working on like 7 at a time right now. It's fun!
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Post by Spazzy on Dec 12, 2004 19:41:12 GMT -5
huh?? I am confused  |
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Post by Cy Skywalker on Dec 12, 2004 19:50:57 GMT -5
me and MFB are writing a fic. And I have like seven different stories I am writing now.
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Post by Spazzy on Dec 12, 2004 19:53:42 GMT -5
oh, now i understand...lol COOLNESS!!
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Post by Spazzy on Dec 17, 2004 14:32:45 GMT -5
wow, i like that poem even though it was done a while ago.... it is very cool.... I give you a kool-aid, for your poem (If that is even possible);D
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Post by K*doom*ELF on Dec 17, 2004 15:13:53 GMT -5
WOAH! yes a little weird, but silver, THAT WAS COOLIO! rocko cool actually.... thew poem that is, the one one time...
NOW IS PASST!!! (sorry thats an inside joke, it goes perfect w/ your poem... actully, werent you there when cy and kt andd io were talking about it?)
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Post by Spazzy on Dec 17, 2004 15:16:02 GMT -5
cool.... I like your other short story as well... It is rocko cool. ;D
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Post by K*doom*ELF on Dec 17, 2004 15:24:40 GMT -5
ooooohhhhhh...the werewolf story is very intriguing....! *shivers* VERY rocko cool! i know the feeling too, happens ALL THE TIME to me...
!!!cutie! you added shakespere!
btw, silver i like your sig as well!
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