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Post by K*doom*ELF on Jan 4, 2005 19:57:30 GMT -5
LOL! you put them together! lollollollollollollollollollollollollol!!!
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Post by Spazzy on Jan 4, 2005 20:29:13 GMT -5
cool...Huh?? I thought it would be interesting to see what the story would be like..
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Post by Cy Skywalker on Jan 5, 2005 15:45:46 GMT -5
aright spazzy, no harm meant but the 4-word game just doesn't translate into a fic. No plot.
Nor, either, does the sentance game. I mean it could, more that the 4 word, but...think of something your own, stemming off it, if you want. And make paragraphs!
i don't mean to trash you, not really. Permission to change the name of "ESPS story" so it's not confused with DijQuest?
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Post by SilverSergyon13 on Jan 5, 2005 17:46:59 GMT -5
It is a fic though. Fun to read.
What exactly does Dijquest mean?
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Post by Spazzy on Jan 5, 2005 17:52:10 GMT -5
There, Cyis that all better for you? I got rid of it for you... I won't mention it took me like 3 hours just to put it in....
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Post by Cy Skywalker on Jan 5, 2005 18:02:55 GMT -5
hey no no no I didn't say get rid if it! I just made suggestions! Terribly sorry, obviously Silver liked it so put it back up! Dij Quest....well i needed a title, I had been thinking of it as just ESPS, or the ESPS fic. The "Dij" is a digital reality, a VR, I made up for an unwritten fic, and "DijQuest" was to be a part of that, but i never used it, but thought it cool, so stuck it on ESPS because it applies.
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Post by Spazzy on Jan 5, 2005 18:25:48 GMT -5
Well, I don't think I will.... I don't want MFB to come on and do the same thing you said.... It would drive me insane...
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Post by Cy Skywalker on Jan 5, 2005 18:33:27 GMT -5
o...well we can't say he would!
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Post by Spazzy on Jan 5, 2005 18:41:16 GMT -5
we don't know if he wouldn't either....
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Post by SilverSergyon13 on Jan 6, 2005 10:33:41 GMT -5
WOW....thats interesting....
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Post by Spazzy on Jan 6, 2005 11:48:40 GMT -5
Well I shall wait for the return of MFB to see what he thinks... I won't speak for him but, I have no idea what he is gonna say about it...
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Post by Cy Skywalker on Jan 6, 2005 18:31:24 GMT -5
'tis very good of you, the decision you made. Await MFB eagerly, we do.
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Post by Spazzy on Jan 6, 2005 19:40:12 GMT -5
Well, if he doesn't like it... I will take it out... for now I shall leave it in here...
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Post by MFB on Jan 10, 2005 23:18:12 GMT -5
Whoa! Responsibility to the MFB! Ok, I shall first review the four-word game fic.
One word, if it be called a word: LOLOLOLOOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL -word break to avoid streached page- LLOLOLOLOLOLLOOLLOOLOLOLOLOLLOOLOLOLOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It was SOOOOOOOOOOOO FUNNY! Of course, it is really done by all of us, so it's a colaberation of our humorous randomness, which means it would of course be funny.. But you see, it is true that alone it cannot be a fic. I would so like to see it be made into a short fic with propper grammer. AC! It is still a humorous fic. Maybe you would like to tackle this, Spaz? Would be good for your writing skills. Not to say that there is anything wrong with it, but there is ALWAYS room for improvement, you know what I mean?
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Post by Spazzy on Jan 11, 2005 14:57:57 GMT -5
Yes, I shall try to fix it.. I don't know if i will come out right.. LOL... yea, CY told me to take it off but, I wanted your opinion about it... so, i shall try to change it!!
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Post by SilverSergyon13 on Jan 11, 2005 18:11:09 GMT -5
Wow, quite critical are we about these stories?
I say leave them the way they are. I think they are good. It'll be hard to put them in paragraphs and whatnot, because it is not a real story and it doesn't go anywhere.
Anyway, do what ya'll want...
Welcome back MFB
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Post by Cy Skywalker on Jan 11, 2005 18:50:15 GMT -5
hey, i never said take it off! Check the post! I do agree with MFB about you should work on "making it into a short fic" and that it is a cool thing to have to show a collaboration of all of us.
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Post by Spazzy on Jan 11, 2005 19:17:40 GMT -5
Well, okay and I did change it a little bit...
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Post by SilverSergyon13 on Jan 11, 2005 21:55:41 GMT -5
I never said you did
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Post by Spazzy on Jan 11, 2005 22:11:24 GMT -5
Well, I changed it anyway... I don't know how iut is..
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